The box

One day I'm at home with my mum and dad. Suddenly the doorbell rang I opened the door and saw a box. I opened it and OW! Something in the box hit me HARD in the stomach and sent me flying and crashing into the wall.

I then tried in another direction. OW! Not again! I then tried the next hundred times. OW! OUCH! OOH! AAARGH! That really hurt! I told my dad too deal with the box. OOF! Whenever my dad tried to open it to fix it the box hit my dad HARD in the stomach. It didn't actually it didn't send him flying though. At the last time a note fell out. It read "HA! HA! HA! Can ya defeat my Radar Jack-in-a-box? I can tell you something. I'm from yar neighbor on da right. HA! HA! HA!" The neighbor on the right? I thought. I then got an idea of paying it back.

I first found a long stick long enough to knock on the neighbor's door. I then put the box in front of the door. Now I used long stick to knock on the door and quietly and quickly pulled it back. Now my neighbor is in for a big surprise. When he opened the box he got hit right in the face!

I know paybacks will let the other person more angry but this is different.