Chapter 1 The lost treasure
One day there were a lot of noises in the crowd.
I asked, “What happened?”
They all answered, “Our great treasure has been stolen!”
I exclaimed, “WHAT!”
“Our treasure is in a secret hiding place in an unknown mysterious and dangerous forest. How come it's stolen?” I asked the sage.
“I don't know why,” answered and old man who is the sage.
“I've already checked in the hiding place a dozen times to find some clues with most of the people in this village but nobody had any clues,” the sage continued. I said, “I think if we check again we might find something in the places that you missed so lets check again.” By the time everybody finished searching there was still nothing found.
I thought for a moment then I realized someone is coming.
“What are you guys doing?” Asked the stranger.
“We're looking for clues to figure out the thief who stole our treasure,” I answered. “You guys are lucky because I'm a detective,” said the stranger.
Chapter 2 Any clues?
The stranger searched carefully. Some broken twigs and footprints found with a magnifying glass. The stranger said, “You guys better get away from this place so I can investigate more properly.”
Then the stranger saw feathers, cotton, wool, powder and fire extinguisher. The stranger believed that the thief had thought there might be traps so the thief brought these stuff.
Now he saw a trail of coins leading to a small cottage that looked old enough that the wind will blow it down. “Aha,” called out the stranger, “I know now! That poor guy wants to buy a new, strong house so the wind won't blow it down and the rain won't go into the new house.”
Then people from the village arrived. “What did you discover?” they asked.
Chapter 3 What did you discover?
The stranger said, “I think the one who lives in that cottage is the one who stole your treasure.”
“How do you know?” asked the people from the village.
“I know that because of the trail of coins. If you don't believe me look at the floor,” said the stranger.
They looked down. They really saw a trail of coins on the floor.
Then the stranger found more and more clues by looking around.
“I'm going to set a trap that might catch that thief. I just need some strong metal chains, a bag of fake jewellery, chocolate coins and a cage,” said the stranger.
Chapter 4 I know who stole it!
The stranger set his trap. Then not for long the thief came back to find more coins and jewellery.
Suddenly a cage fell down and wrapped him. All the village people came to see who the thief was. They did not know who that person was but the detective knew. “It's Jonathon Bangs the person who made fake lollies which used drugs and got fined. Now he was poor and found out your place has a valuable treasure so he lived here,” said the detective.
The sage started talking to the thief.
The lazy ones had already fell asleep because it last a very long time and it's too boring.
The sage said, “If you give back our treasure, we can let you go and build you a strong new house.”
Thief finally obeyed what sage had said by the time the lazy people woke up.
Now the people don't need to worry about the thief anymore because the detective and the sage solved the problem.
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