Chapter 1 The lost treasure
One day there were a lot of noises in the crowd.
I asked, “What happened?”
They all answered, “Our great treasure has been stolen!”
I exclaimed, “WHAT!”
“Our treasure is in a secret hiding place in an unknown mysterious and dangerous forest. How come it's stolen?” I asked the sage.
“I don't know why,” answered and old man who is the sage.
“I've already checked in the hiding place a dozen times to find some clues with most of the people in this village but nobody had any clues,” the sage continued. I said, “I think if we check again we might find something in the places that you missed so lets check again.” By the time everybody finished searching there was still nothing found.
I thought for a moment then I realized someone is coming.
“What are you guys doing?” Asked the stranger.
“We're looking for clues to figure out the thief who stole our treasure,” I answered. “You guys are lucky because I'm a detective,” said the stranger.
Chapter 2 Any clues?
The stranger searched carefully. Some broken twigs and footprints found with a magnifying glass. The stranger said, “You guys better get away from this place so I can investigate more properly.”
Then the stranger saw feathers, cotton, wool, powder and fire extinguisher. The stranger believed that the thief had thought there might be traps so the thief brought these stuff.
Now he saw a trail of coins leading to a small cottage that looked old enough that the wind will blow it down. “Aha,” called out the stranger, “I know now! That poor guy wants to buy a new, strong house so the wind won't blow it down and the rain won't go into the new house.”
Then people from the village arrived. “What did you discover?” they asked.
Chapter 3 What did you discover?
The stranger said, “I think the one who lives in that cottage is the one who stole your treasure.”
“How do you know?” asked the people from the village.
“I know that because of the trail of coins. If you don't believe me look at the floor,” said the stranger.
They looked down. They really saw a trail of coins on the floor.
Then the stranger found more and more clues by looking around.
“I'm going to set a trap that might catch that thief. I just need some strong metal chains, a bag of fake jewellery, chocolate coins and a cage,” said the stranger.
Chapter 4 I know who stole it!
The stranger set his trap. Then not for long the thief came back to find more coins and jewellery.
Suddenly a cage fell down and wrapped him. All the village people came to see who the thief was. They did not know who that person was but the detective knew. “It's Jonathon Bangs the person who made fake lollies which used drugs and got fined. Now he was poor and found out your place has a valuable treasure so he lived here,” said the detective.
The sage started talking to the thief.
The lazy ones had already fell asleep because it last a very long time and it's too boring.
The sage said, “If you give back our treasure, we can let you go and build you a strong new house.”
Thief finally obeyed what sage had said by the time the lazy people woke up.
Now the people don't need to worry about the thief anymore because the detective and the sage solved the problem.
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Monday, November 30, 2009
Thursday, November 26, 2009
The Sticky chewing gum
Once there was person who liked to chew chewing gum. He chewed chewing gum at home for breakfast, lunch and dinner. He chewed it at school at fruit break, lunch and recess. One day he accidentally bought the wrong chewing gum without looking. It was very sticky like a super glue. Now he couldn't eat anything. He went to a professor to check out what could stop the gluey chewing gum by talking in sign language. The professor gave him a glue destroyer, a paste that could stop things sticking to each other. Now he could freely open his mouth and he never liked to chew chewing gum again.
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
My Stories (One of my blogger)
My Stories is a blogger that has stories. I use it to save stories.
I wrote all my stories in My Stories.
I like writing stories just like an author.
The stories that I wrote were created by myself and checked by my Mum.
The stories that I wrote are not for nothing. I wrote those stories are for you to read so please don't forget to read my stories in My Stories.
I wrote all my stories in My Stories.
I like writing stories just like an author.
The stories that I wrote were created by myself and checked by my Mum.
The stories that I wrote are not for nothing. I wrote those stories are for you to read so please don't forget to read my stories in My Stories.
Monday, November 9, 2009
The day I went to the beach
Last Sunday I went to the beach by train and bus. I walked along the seaside with my Mum, Dad, grandpa, grandma, Marina (my friend) and Marina's mum.
On the way we saw sculptures and then we reached the beach.
At the beach I played with Marina and I dug up a hole to find wet sand. When we were hungry we went to a restaurant to have Yum-cha for lunch.
After that we went home happily.
On the way we saw sculptures and then we reached the beach.
At the beach I played with Marina and I dug up a hole to find wet sand. When we were hungry we went to a restaurant to have Yum-cha for lunch.
After that we went home happily.
Sunday, November 8, 2009
The Magic Day
In the morning I woke up and I saw my room nice and tidy and outside there were flowers blooming.
There were animals and creatures gathering around and around.
I thought it was magical so I got out and looked. I saw a castle nearby so I thought a place that had a castle should be clean but I wanted to find out more.
I found out my house was a cottage. Before I knew it, it had changed. My house was supposed to be a little shack but it turned into a cottage. Then I saw a lighthouse nearby. I knocked on the lighthouse's door and I asked "Is anyone inside?" Then a witch stepped out the door.
She didn't look like a bad witch so I asked "Did you make all of this land change?" She answered "Of course, who can do it so quickly?" I said "So you done it all? That's incredible!" She said "I think it is too but don't you think it's beautiful?" I answered "Yes." She asked "Do you want me to change it back?" I answered "No, thanks. I don't want any change now."
Now I knew what happened so I didn't need to worry any more.
There were animals and creatures gathering around and around.
I thought it was magical so I got out and looked. I saw a castle nearby so I thought a place that had a castle should be clean but I wanted to find out more.
I found out my house was a cottage. Before I knew it, it had changed. My house was supposed to be a little shack but it turned into a cottage. Then I saw a lighthouse nearby. I knocked on the lighthouse's door and I asked "Is anyone inside?" Then a witch stepped out the door.
She didn't look like a bad witch so I asked "Did you make all of this land change?" She answered "Of course, who can do it so quickly?" I said "So you done it all? That's incredible!" She said "I think it is too but don't you think it's beautiful?" I answered "Yes." She asked "Do you want me to change it back?" I answered "No, thanks. I don't want any change now."
Now I knew what happened so I didn't need to worry any more.
Thursday, October 8, 2009
The Forest
A forest has a lot of trees. There are palm trees, oak trees and more.
There are a lot of creatures such as animals and insects, some even look like aliens!
There are shrubs and fruits that the animals eat and the left over seeds grows new plants again!
A forest is a very good place to explore.
The main idea is-
(A) What is a forest.
(B) What is a forest like.
(C) What things are in the forest.
There are a lot of creatures such as animals and insects, some even look like aliens!
There are shrubs and fruits that the animals eat and the left over seeds grows new plants again!
A forest is a very good place to explore.
The main idea is-
(A) What is a forest.
(B) What is a forest like.
(C) What things are in the forest.
Monday, October 5, 2009
My Excursion At Power Museum - present tense
Today I go to the Powerhouse Museum with my Dad.
I go in the gravity room and it feels like I'm falling. We see frames that each has a picture inside and it looks like 3D. My Dad and I also go in a kitchen with a light control panel and antiques.
There's a kid's playground inside and outside and I go in both and both are fun!
When my Dad and I have finished watching and playing we go home.
I go in the gravity room and it feels like I'm falling. We see frames that each has a picture inside and it looks like 3D. My Dad and I also go in a kitchen with a light control panel and antiques.
There's a kid's playground inside and outside and I go in both and both are fun!
When my Dad and I have finished watching and playing we go home.
Tuesday, June 23, 2009
The Thing I Like doing In Class
The thing I like doing in class is art.
I like art because it is your own picture that you draw in your mind.
Monday, June 22, 2009
Holiday in Christmas (this year's wish)
I like to make my wish in Christmas day. In Christmas children get gifts from Santa.
Getting gifts is a fun thing which is free (but you have to be ready for your Christmas tree.)
After Christmas day it's boxing day that you see if you got the right gift and is the surprising day.
My wish is I could have a toy airplane.
Getting gifts is a fun thing which is free (but you have to be ready for your Christmas tree.)
After Christmas day it's boxing day that you see if you got the right gift and is the surprising day.
My wish is I could have a toy airplane.
Sunday, June 7, 2009
More games!
Want to play more games?
Go to these cool websites for more games!
www.bigfishgames.com, www.worldwinner.com, www.miniclip.com
At big fish games download and play online games for free.
At world winner play fun expert games.
And play one billion free online games for free!
So many free downloads and so many free online games so hurry!
Hope you be happy!
Go to these cool websites for more games!
www.bigfishgames.com, www.worldwinner.com, www.miniclip.com
At big fish games download and play online games for free.
At world winner play fun expert games.
And play one billion free online games for free!
So many free downloads and so many free online games so hurry!
Hope you be happy!
Friday, May 8, 2009
My Surgery In The Hospital
Last Friday I had a surgery on the tiny hole on my heart near the valve.
I had medicines at the hospital such as morphine and Panadol.
I got one pipe on my right hand and three on my body.
When the pipes were removed I feel itchy on my lined scar.
On Wednesday I got the dressing (that is on the wound) off and I was discharged from the hospital.
I had medicines at the hospital such as morphine and Panadol.
I got one pipe on my right hand and three on my body.
When the pipes were removed I feel itchy on my lined scar.
On Wednesday I got the dressing (that is on the wound) off and I was discharged from the hospital.
Wednesday, April 22, 2009
Beijing Olympic 2008
Beijing Olympic had different sports.
There were badminton, tennis, table tennis, javelin throw, hammer throw, shooting, fencing, rowing, athletic, swimming, high jump, long jump and triple jump.
When you play badminton there's a light ball.You have to use the badminton racket to hit the bottom part of the ball.
When you play tennis there's a ball that is a little bit heavy. You need the tennis racket to hit the ball.
When you play table tennis there's a little, white ball. You use the table tennis bat to hit the ball.
When you play javelin throw you run and then you throw the javelin as far as you can.
When you play hammer throw you spin around and throw the hammer in the right spot as far as you can.
When you play shooting you aim and shoot the flying disks.
When you play fencing you wear a protective uniform and try to use the sword and poke their tummy.
When you play rowing (even team rowing) you row the owes in a beat.
When you play athletic you run as fast as you can.
When you play swimming you swim as fast as you can.
When you play high jump you run and jump as high as you can over the stick.
When you play long jump you run and jump as long as you can.
When you play triple jump you run and you jump as long as the three jumps are long.
I have learnt all these sports from Nintendo Wii.
There were badminton, tennis, table tennis, javelin throw, hammer throw, shooting, fencing, rowing, athletic, swimming, high jump, long jump and triple jump.
When you play badminton there's a light ball.You have to use the badminton racket to hit the bottom part of the ball.
When you play tennis there's a ball that is a little bit heavy. You need the tennis racket to hit the ball.
When you play table tennis there's a little, white ball. You use the table tennis bat to hit the ball.
When you play javelin throw you run and then you throw the javelin as far as you can.
When you play hammer throw you spin around and throw the hammer in the right spot as far as you can.
When you play shooting you aim and shoot the flying disks.
When you play fencing you wear a protective uniform and try to use the sword and poke their tummy.
When you play rowing (even team rowing) you row the owes in a beat.
When you play athletic you run as fast as you can.
When you play swimming you swim as fast as you can.
When you play high jump you run and jump as high as you can over the stick.
When you play long jump you run and jump as long as you can.
When you play triple jump you run and you jump as long as the three jumps are long.
I have learnt all these sports from Nintendo Wii.
Saturday, February 28, 2009
Cindy's Space Cup
Friday, February 20, 2009
How I'm simmilar Or Different To My Family
How am I different to mum? She has long hair, she's a woman and she wears a dress.
How am I simmilar to my mum? She was born in winter like me.
How am I different to my dad? He has curled hair.
How am I simmilar to my dad? We both have skillful hands.
How am I simmilar to my mum? She was born in winter like me.
How am I different to my dad? He has curled hair.
How am I simmilar to my dad? We both have skillful hands.
Sunday, February 15, 2009
Sunday, February 8, 2009
The fun Saturday
Monday, February 2, 2009
In the holidays
In the holidays I went to three BBQs. One BBQ was at Lisa's house. One for Judy's engagement and one was at my house.
I went to the movies to watch bedtime stories. In the Bedtime stories there are stories just like Mr Buttkiss, the Buggie monster and the other one I can't remember.
I like the bedtime stories.
Wednesday, January 28, 2009
The First Day Of School
Sunday, January 25, 2009
The bedtime stories (at the movies/my favourite part)
Saturday, January 10, 2009
Thursday, January 8, 2009
The Magic Scissors
Monday, January 5, 2009
The Poor Family
Once there was a poor family that had lived in a city.
They had no business at all.
They had wrote a beautiful book.
One day a man told him to sell the books.
And so he did and became very rich.
They had no business at all.
They had wrote a beautiful book.
One day a man told him to sell the books.
And so he did and became very rich.
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